seb’s 100 word challenge

January 14th, 2015 | Posted by sebastianoak12 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

Frosty,cold,snowy the world was at this point there was no sun it was terrible fore the lovely people. But it was wears for Dave and his mum they were poor they had £1234 it was not easy to get food because they had know job.But then the sun came out the light of the sun was SO bright.”its to bright,”said the people.Expect Dave and his mum they loved “its amazing”they said.But the thieves did dent like it cus they were being spoted all the time it was time fore pay back.So this night the thieves got there there weapons and killed nearly every guard in the town.

                                                                             THE END   

Jacks 100wc

January 14th, 2015 | Posted by jackoak12 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

One sunny day,in the Midlands was a girl called Ashley she lived in a butifal cottage she used to play in the fields into it snowed she was so glad she said it was o most like winter her mother came out the cottage and said to Ashley “time to go to bed dear.” “OK “said Ashley.

Couple of months later it was her birthday she was so happy the sun was so bright she went to the beach and she never stopped having fun in until a day later a new Queen concord the country she didn’t know the evil queen destroyed Ashley’s house but a man called Jack rebuilt the house up and made it with a swimming pool because they didn’t have one at the start lived happily ever after.

The End

Deacons 100wc

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by deacondrybrook14 in 100 Word - (3 Comments)

One sunny day a boy was on the laptop and he was using the mouse as a
phone.His mum kept saying its not a phone Kia and then he was using the screen as a tablet.Then his dad came home and shouted its tea time Kia. He was upset and as he started they got burnt on the food and he was sad because his parents were in a coma for two weeks at most but all he was
doing was watching tv and ringing the pizza delivery guy.When his mum and dad were back they were as mad as anything because

Megan c 100wc

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by megancdrybrook14 in 100 Word - (1 Comments)

Once upon a time there were twins. The boy was calld popcorn and the girl calld lollypop.   The childran popcorn and lollypop was going to the zoo. Popcorn whent awt the dor. As he started they sor a hedghog trot rit in frunt of them. Shokt, amast, frasuld the twins talkt abawt the hedghog all the way to the zoo. The man sed to the children “go on throo that gayt and your advenchr bgins. The children scipt all the way to the gats. Popcorn and lollypop sor  Pengwins, lions, drafs, elefunts, and lemrs. But that was only five of the animals. There whre  exotik animals to.

Damian 100 Word Challenge

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by damiandrybrook14 in 100 Word - (1 Comments)

One glamorous sunny day there seven Sims.  Sims are people who live in your computer, if you download  it.  There names are Dee-Jay, Sasha, Damian, Michael, Persophene, Bomby and Sophie. As Bomby was eating a slice of his brothers and sisters cake.Suddenly Michael burnt the kitchen stove nearly killing himself, until Damian and Bomby saved his life by using a fire thing that dosen’t explode your electrical item.”Thanks guys,” said Michael greatfuly.

Four long weeks later…

“Mike what was that for?” said Damian disgracefully

Five minites later…

Sasha said… ” Boys stop Damian, Michael! stop at once.”

They both said “Sorry mom.

Then when her back turned they started fighting again.

To Be Continued.

 

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seb’s 100 word challenge

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by sebastianoak12 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

Derek ran in the woods as a weird monster chased him but then he tripped over on a root. As the monster was about to eat him a strange man in the shadows and killed the monster.Then he ran to Derek he was wearing an ebony,shiny,silk coat.He put his hand out to get Derek up thanks said Derek as they went in the man’s house they had a disco but as they started they heard a knock on the door and it was a assassin.”Hi”said the assassin “hi im Derek”  “I know who you are you are being hunted by the monster god called Hades.

 

TO BE CONTINUED

THE END

Charlotte.W’s 100wc

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by charlottedrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

As he started they looked and ran,the people from the other side of the village did not recognise him,he didn’t know why then he looked at himself in a crazy little mirror.Shocked,scared,devastated, “how did this happen to me I look like a prince but why? I don’t want to!” Then he thought why am I here,the only last thing I remember is falling asleep last night in the rainforest.Anyway he didn’t care how he looked so he got up bashed his foot and stormed off to go see how he ended up back at his village. Unusually he picked up the mirror and smashed it against his knee then he went and stepped foot into the rainforest all he could see were tree’s grass and rain animals,but then he saw something extraordinary “it’s a girl” he was out-mazed by the beauty on the girl’s blossoming face.He was so tired he daydreamed about the girl,but he thought it was no time for romance he had to get the reason why he woke up in his village so he kept travelling against the twisted concrete path.After all the gibber-jabber he found out it was cause the girl walked him home then someone must’ve texted him sayAs he started they looked and ran,the people from the other side of the village did not recognise him,he didn’t know why then he looked at himself in a crazy little mirror.Shocked,scared,devastated, “how did this happen to me I look like a prince but why? I don’t want to!” Then he thought why am I here,the only last thing I remember is falling asleep last night in the rainforest.Anyway he didn’t care how he looked so he got up bashed his foot and stormed off to go see how he ended up back at his village. Unusually he picked up the mirror and smashed it against his knee then he went and stepped foot into the rainforest all he could see were tree’s grass and rain animals,but then he saw something extraordinary “it’s a girl” he was out-mazed by the beauty on the girl’s blossoming face.He was so tired he daydreamed about the girl,but he thought it was no time for romance he had to get the reason why he woke up in his village so he kept travelling against the twisted concrete path.After all the gibber-jabber he found out it was cause the girl walked him home then someone must’ve texted him saying that the same girl that was lying in the rainforest got knocked out.

lily ,s DEAD ENED 100WC

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by lilydrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

ONE day lily was not a good girl she siad to Freya their must be a dead ened for liam so Freya,s boy called sephehn he was not as good as you like. AS he stared they killed liam. NINJA SOPE SATHED US FORM DEAD . So Sope said you can help me from a dead ened in a dradgon war . HAPPILY ,GREATFORIY , GLEEFULLY they set of to the dragon war . WEare going to have to get some armer from molly . ONthe way they went on a bus ,car hors to molly . THEN the war started in a dead ened for the wold.

mollys 100wc

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by mollysdrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

As he started they heard mike shouting so tee and carmon  went down to see what was wrong .  mike was shouting at frank because he had only been  at his job for 45 mins .So tee said to johnny to say liam is coming  over .Johnny said why is he coming over hes got hes  brother     .tee said because hes brother didnt want him in his house and hes staying over for a couple of days .a few days later liam was at the dumping ground .Frank was thinking of a way to make mike happy so he falt then he had an idea  then he did it and they were happy the end

 

 

The Gargoyle part two

 

“Why do the gargoyles give people nightmares” said Mercedes

“You won’t understand, lets go down for breakfast but I will tell you one they say that when he starts he doesn’t stop but some people say as he started they run to Gloucester said Mckenzie.

 

Breakfast time:

Mckenzie made two bowls of cereal, one for her and one for Mercedes.

After they ate breakfast, they went to the dry cleaners to pick up Mercedes’s party dress for the party they were going to.

Then they went to the tailor shop to get the lady, Charlotte, to make a beautiful party dress. Charlotte did not stop until she finished.

 

To be continued…..

Jacks 100word challenge

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by jackoak12 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

one sunny day in a cottage a man called Jake was baking a cake as he started they put the dough in the boll and salt.

The second thing he did was put water in and then he rect the cake it was going to be for the party at Joel’s house Jake rushed to the store called sainsburys oh know! There is no cakes so he went to the coop and bought a triple chocolate cake Jake was in time for the party Joel said this is a strange cake but I like it thanks! Jake the party finished and then Jake went home then my friend bailey and Ryan came and we had fun we went to the fair together and then we went home we had a good day and the next morning we had fun again then we went to the fair and we had a try on the do -gems,fairs wheel,and the water rides and nothing spoilt our fun then a knight we had a KFC we all ordered chips and spicy chicken then we all went home bailey went in his mini Jake went home on the bus and Ryan went home in a taxi when Jake went home he played on the Xbox one and they had a lovely day.

The end

Riley’s 100 word challenge

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by rileydrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

On the first day of January, a boy called Tom,  came down to have his break fast but then his mum, and dad came into the room to tell Tom that it was the end of the world. When they tried to tell him, he didn’t listen but as he started,  they heard a knock at the door, it was the mayor to say a rocket is going to launchat 8:00 o’clock in the morning, so they went to tell Tom, who was eating crisps and watching TV. Then his mum and dad came in, they turned off the TV so Tom would listen.

Jacks 100wc

November 24th, 2014 | Posted by jackoak12 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

One day, in a forest there was a little boy walking frue he believed in viscous were wolfs, he fought they were real one night he saw from his bed room window a shadow what looked like a were wolf.

when he was looking at the window, he saw a big shadow like a viscous werewolf shadow he went to descover out side and herd a wolf go woo the boy got scared, and ran back to his front door as the leaves rustled and the werewolf apapered and the boy was trying to get f rue his front door but he couldn’t open it then the werewolf ate him, up for good.

The end

Chelsea 100wc

November 24th, 2014 | Posted by chelseadrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

…He was shocked to find a little girl called Charlotte in the bag.  She knew karate so she started hitting the man in the face. He ran away screaming his head off.

“Get off of me now please?!” he shouted

Charlotte got back in the bag and kept quiet for a moment thinking the man was weird. The man went back to Charlotte and said “you are a naughty little girl aren’t you.” He said miserably.

He when outside for some fresh air and watched the leaves fall to the ground. But as the leaves rustled the man noticed  and said how on earth did you get here…

to be continued next time

 

 

Riley’s 100 word challenge

November 24th, 2014 | Posted by rileydrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

So far in this story a man who is called metal head had found a zoo keeper then the zoo keeper ran and hid away so metal head wants the zoo keeper to be caught, because he might tell the president of the United States what metal head might have done.

The zoo  keeper was still running then he stopped but as the leaves rustled two of metal head’s robots went flying passed the zoo keeper and didn’t know he was there so he ran away the other direction.

Then the zoo keeper came across  a hotel then he had a look at the sun and he stade there for the night.

today me and Archie went to are base in the woods and that’s where the story start so we got there and we built a den but as the leaves rustled the den broke.”NOO!”we both said well lets do dis thing.First we got sticks then we built it.After 2 hours it was built but then I thought my bottle droped on the floor but it did dent but I did not know that then.I drank from it and there was a slug in it.It was discusting so I went home toled my mum fore the rest of the day.5 days later Its still there.

                                           

 

                                                                                                               the end!    

Damian 100 Word Challenge

November 24th, 2014 | Posted by damiandrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

Once upon a time there was a man called Joe and a man called David. They were YouTubers, Joe’s user name was Stampylongnose. ( Also known as  Stampy.) David’s was Ibillsticsquid. ( Also known as Squid.) But when Squid was making a video as the leaves rustled it crashed Squids internet. Luckily Stampy was filming, but it was a two player map. Stampy was divested that he had to turn off his camera. When Squid got his internet back he realised that he missed his video he cheeked his subscribers he had none.

Deacon’s 100wc

November 17th, 2014 | Posted by deacondrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

He was shocked to find a….dark blue creature it showed him the future a happy family then he saw him self laughing no that was not him he never laughed.He fainted  and his robot guards helped him up and asked him”what did you see”?He did not answer he kicked a guard out of the way and ran to his secret base full of traps.A guard came and tried to cheer his master up but it did not work his master dissembled  the evil robot and made a big metal sculpture it was him.He laughed,smiled and hugged him self he also ran to his minions and smiled.

 

THE END

Bethany 100wc

November 17th, 2014 | Posted by bethanydrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

He was shocked to find a princess ling on the  floor singing fireworks  so the prince went to see her but she walked away FROM him . cheekily monkey stole his hat when he was dancing .

molly s 100wc

November 17th, 2014 | Posted by mollysdrybrook14 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

He was shocked to find a  human in the bag that had some stones and wood .Cheekily, he tried to get out but they got it. Scared,based,frighted,that he was there so he said why have you got me i haven’t done anything.So why do you what me because we didn’t know that you were in there  so we might let you go may be .So they said come with me and please stay for  a Min or two okay.so the human said all right . So the human just wanted to get out of here so they walked around but in the end he went.the end

 

 

He was shocked to find in the bag a man he    the ran.”Get him”!!!!!!!All the lords  robots tried to get him the man  ran to the only safe place on the dark earth.He Finely made it ”HELLO!”hello young one”said the good lord ”you archly survived”said the good lord ”yep”said the man ”your a hero you know” said the good lord ”really”said the man ”yep. And your first mission is to spy on the lord but before you do that you need to train”.10 days later your reddy when he got there he kicked the door open he sneaked in. Sneakily he ran to a wall exited thrilled  amazed he herd this ”he escaped the human yes I know we are building a bomb to kill him.

                                                                                                            To be continued!!!

Jacks 100wc

November 17th, 2014 | Posted by jackoak12 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

The dark dark day in the woods was an evil man he was called the scary night zoo keeper and he had these robot spiders.

Silently he creped and looked at the bag he checked inside and it was a robot chicken what bit,hurted and resaled.

When they walked back to the lear they locket up the chicken robot 2 days later he lay’d 200 eggs and the master killed the eggs so no more chickens come up.

The lord left and his guards were guarding the jail with no one in it the lord left and lived happily ever arfter.

THE END by Jack brain

                                       the night zoo keeper 

He was shocked to find ….. a goddess the prettiest goddess ever as you can guess it was Aphrodite goddess of love.he fell  for her like no ones biz at first sight he wanted to purpose but from his knowledge he knew that she loved Ares and Poseidon but was married to hephaestus god of fire and blacksmiths  so he found it best to stay quiet.

“shocked ,puzzled,confused you are probably feeling all of these emotions”. mumbled Aphrodite ” i love y.”and the lord covered his mouth before he could say you. but he asked “can i marry you please ?” and Aphrodite said “YES I WILL MARRY YOU ! but first i need to tell hephestus the bad news. and lived happily ever after  THE END

Bailey

November 17th, 2014 | Posted by baileyoak12 in 100 Word - (0 Comments)

He was shocked to find a golden apple when he ate the golden apple he fell a sleep. sneakily the joker captured the riddler .  terrfide , confused, scared  batman tried to get the riddler to brake out of the prison and the ridder said”what if the joker caches us” he wont because yov got me remember oh yer who is that it is the jokerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!. what or rite ridder go to the batcave you be safe there and i will trie to kill the joker

to be continude

Charlotte W’s 100wc

November 17th, 2014 | Posted by charlottedrybrook14 in 100 Word - (1 Comments)

He was shocked to find  the sunlight diamond.Cheekily he kicked the bag right off the cliff and the diamond smashed against the rocks on the pavement. shocked,amazed,scared,he ran and jumped off the cliff after he saw the diamond smash.He saved himself by his hands and then all the animals came after him but he stopped them by the moon.It was a very boring night after that there was nothing to see all there  were some more trash cans,tall buildings and some lamp posts so there was nothing there really. But he said “at least we still have the diamond” “I guess so” said one of the animals. Well after that he saw something else hiding in the bottom of the bag…

 

to be continued…

Riley’s 100 word challenge

November 17th, 2014 | Posted by rileydrybrook14 in 100 Word - (1 Comments)

He was shocked to find  a big ow then out the bag  was a zoo keeper then the zoo keeper said ” where am I and who are you? then the man with the mask on said” I am metal head” and there are no other humans here. Sneakily, while metal head was talking to his guard the zoo keeper ran away in to the forest and hid away in a tree. Angered,distressed,worried, metal head was worried that the zoo keeper would tell the president of the United States what we did to him we need to find him now search every where around here I want him found.

TO BE CONTINUED

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