Damian 100 Word Challenge

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by damiandrybrook14 in 100 Word

One glamorous sunny day there seven Sims.  Sims are people who live in your computer, if you download  it.  There names are Dee-Jay, Sasha, Damian, Michael, Persophene, Bomby and Sophie. As Bomby was eating a slice of his brothers and sisters cake.Suddenly Michael burnt the kitchen stove nearly killing himself, until Damian and Bomby saved his life by using a fire thing that dosen’t explode your electrical item.”Thanks guys,” said Michael greatfuly.

Four long weeks later…

“Mike what was that for?” said Damian disgracefully

Five minites later…

Sasha said… ” Boys stop Damian, Michael! stop at once.”

They both said “Sorry mom.

Then when her back turned they started fighting again.

To Be Continued.

 

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  • Ms, Davis (Team 100WC) says:

    Hello Damian,
    Thank you for explaining Sim characters. There are some people that are not familiar with them. Please forgive me, but I do not see the “as he started they” line in your post. I may have overlooked it, but be sure to proofread you work in the future. Also, can you explain the gaps in time between when your characters speak?

    Thanks for sharing!
    Ms. Davis (Team 100WC)



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