caitlin 100wc

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by caitlinoak12 in Uncategorized

As he started they all started to walk, when they finally reached the woods they took the wrong turning and they ended up going on a track they have never been on before. There was long grass, stinging nettles and even little brooks. So we all had to jump over the brook, it was small and there was a really wet slippery log and we held hands and we got across all the brooks. They realised they got a bit lost then they saw the main track again so they had a really long walk it was so so fun.

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  • Gabrielle says:

    I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge. I can imagine being where you have described, which shows that you have used good descriptive language. Perhaps to improve you could think of some better vocabulary instead of ‘so fun’ and ‘really long’. Other than that, great work.



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