kelsey 100 word 2015

January 5th, 2015 | Posted by kelseyoak12 in Uncategorized

One new years eve, there was a party going to start at midnight, there was people knocking at the door. With a little gift or some thing it was three ours in tile midnight so they just sat down and watched the game.They had a couple of bears and a our went past so then it was too ours to go the game ended because the power went of the man was so angry, mad, furious and then it came back on and it was midnight and as he started the party started.The put banging music on and it was very loud rock star music, it was so loud it burst the man,s ear drums but when he started to sing the all sing. THE END

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  • Mrs Davis (Team 100WC) says:

    Hello Kelsey and thank you for entering the 100WC this week! Well done for including the prompt, but next time take extra care to make sure you have copied it correctly! I enjoyed reading your writing. A good tip is to read your work out loud to yourself after you have finished, and pretend that you have never seen it before. That way, it will make it easier for you to spot where you need to put full stops and capital letters. Well done and keep up the good work!
    Mrs D, Team 100, Cambridgeshire, UK



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