January 14th, 2015 | Posted by anouskadrybrook14 in Uncategorized

One amazing day a little girl named Olive woke up, and sore it was snowing.         Excitedly, she jumped out of bed and went down stairs,  and put on her gear.

As she opened the door the sun beamed on her the light was so bright she steeped out side and built a snowman.

Happily, excitedly, Olive jumped in the snow crazily as she was playing her friends came over and asked if they were aloud to play with her.

And they all they all played together happily they all built snowmen.

And they all lived happily ever after the end.

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  • Fiona (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Anouska, happy new year!

    Thanks for your 100 WC. I liked the image you painted in my imagination of Olive getting ready to go outside and then playing with her friends. I wonder what she was thinking and feeling while all of this was going on. You’ve used some great vocabulary, like “amazing” and “beamed” – I think you are going to have a great year of writing especially if you keep picking words like those to use. Well done!

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