The Long 24 Hour Queue

January 18th, 2016 | Posted by freyadrybrook15 in 100 Word

As I  joined the queue it got longer and longer, infact after 20 minutes it rapidly got out of the shop door. I felt like I was going to barf  because the smell was horrible. It smelt like cucumber, cheesy feet and smelly socks. Also behind me there was a baby that had been sick. After about half an hour, the queue had gone across the coal coloured road and up the hill. Not long after the shop keeper shouted that we’d have to wait for 24 hours! 24 hours! But I guess I want my sweets so I’m gonna wait.

 

The End

You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 You can skip to the end and leave a response. Pinging is currently not allowed.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

%d bloggers like this:
Skip to toolbar