to Fatimata my life by charlotte

June 4th, 2012 | Posted by charlotteoak11 in 100 Word

To fatimata my life invalvs with ponys and horses i love them. they are the

main part of my life.  i am called charlotte i am a girl i am 8. And 9 in july.

i have a dog called tigger at my mums but at my dads i have 3 dogs called bentley (the odest dog) missy (the inbetween dog) and rooby (the puppy).

haa lots of dogs we love anamles in my family. i have no bruthers or sisters buti have 2 step brothers and 1 step sister my step sister is 13 my step brother is 11. i am the yungest in the home.


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9 Responses

  • poppyoak11 says:

    i like your it charlotte brill fab

  • Ross Mannell (Team 100WC) says:

    Hello Charlotte,

    This would be a lovely letter to send to Fatimata. You have written it as though your were her friend. I think Fatimata would be interested to know you also liked animals.

    I see Liz Goddard, also of Team 100WC, has suggested you read your story aloud so you can find small errors. This is excellent advice. Whenever I write, I always reread what I have written as I often make small errors.

    I hope you keep entering the 100WC.

    @RossMannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher, NSW, Australia

  • amberoak11 says:

    i love ponys so you are not the only one 😛

  • williamoak11 says:

    I like your story and the coments

  • Liz Goddard (TEAM 100WC) says:

    Hi Charlotte,
    I think that Fatimata would be interested to hear about your life and all your animals. As you love animals so much you will understand how sad she feels about losing all their animals.

    Try reading your work out loud after you have typed it. This may help you notice any small errors such as capital letters for I and at the start of sentences.

    Keep up the great writing!

    • charlotteoak11 says:

      thank you i do love anmals i do live with them thay are a mane part of my life to liz goddars from charlotte!!!!!! 🙂

  • poppyoak11 says:

    Good 100 word charlotte alothugh I think it’s all about your pets not you

  • graceoak11 says:

    Very good but you are so ubsest wiith poneys and if you keep on you will turn into a poney
    Then you will be happy and it will keep you quiet. From grace

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